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[icantsleeep]

icantstoplaughing

I don't know why I enjoyed this entry.
It wasn't trying to be witty and it didn't have a purpose.... but it was funny and I felt like I was on drugs. I enjoyed this a lot more than the author's HappyLand series. What made me laugh harder was all the goofy messages laced in the clip.

The false ending was great too.

I really loved the ability to stop the clip, run it backward and forward.

I would've rated this entry a 7 overall but the inclusion of Mr. T's Be Somebody tape made me bump the score up to 8.

[dont touch the pan !]

someone took my HTML!!!! eeeeee!!!!

I've taken a break from writing reviews for portal entries due to the amount of crap in it.
A good solid entry like this was enough to get me back into it.
The voice acting was superb- the volume was just right and the characteristics of children characters was accurately portrayed.
The sound effects were incorporated very well and the dialogue was just priceless.
There are a few parts were the sound does break up a bit- intentional or not it's a minor flaw.

The biggest flaw of this entry was the lack of a play button and a replay button at the time I viewed it.

The only other thing was the lack of credits present in the entry- it was nice to see an entry without the long list of credits but the author didn't even put his name in it!
I hope it is added in the future to prevent people from stealing this very amusing short.

BUT YOU STOLE MY JAVASCRIPT FIRST YOU WHORE!!!
AAAAHHHRRRRHHHHHHHRR RHHH!!!!

Hahahahaha!

[FUKEMON:Benny hill!]

Captured the Benny Hill spirit.

This portal entry captured the spirit of Benny Hill's comedy. It was a fun clip to watch.
One minor thing that bugged me was the first scene (and other chase scenes where the same background was used) where "Fabio" chases the "Fukemon"- the background was not looped smoothly enough so the trees kept "resetting" their position.
Other small things in the clip were amusing- the Calvin Lame Jeans and the bust of Jimmy....
The final scene when the credits displayed was my favourite... poor Fukemon, he got caught!

It was funny and the important thing was that it made me laugh. What stops me from giving this a higher score are minor technical details- for example the animation in general was a little blocky- which I'm sure the author can smooth out in future entries.

[Scrap Book: Mon vs. Fita]

That's a lot of class...

That was a great short.
Although the "farting" sound kind of detracted from the clip, the animation and style of the clip blew me away and made up for it.

The physics in the clip (the falling of the characters etc.) were animated with shocking realism (I'm not talking about the cartoony parts where Fita hangs in the air- I'm talking about the movement of the characters) It felt very organic and real. When Fita is falling between the buildings you can almost feel the heat generated from her feet sliding down the walls of the building.

The humour was also great- from the guns rolling out to the "music" starting when the walkman comes on screen to the leg of the corpse moving to fit the chalk outline.

This was non-stop action with a decisive climax.
The ending music was a little anti-climatic though- the hanging drum roll leaves much to be desired for.

So what was wrong with the clip that kept me from giving it a 10?

IT'S TOO SHORT!

I hope the author makes more soon!
I'm hoping that this just the 2nd of many Scrap Book series to come.
Also, check out Damian Martin's Tana series- great stuff there too.

damianmartins responds:

Wow, bud. Thanks. Do you do this for a living?

[britney, britney, britney]

Great voice acting and funny to boot.

Great script, great animation, great voice-over...

The only problem I can find with this clip is the Janet Jackson impression didn't sound like her...
But that's the only flaw I noticed....

It was a great clip. The idea of the breast exposing device was fresh and funny.

The thing that really impressed me was how the story in the clip progressed... the climax of the story where Britney steals the show was hilarious.

I can't wait to see more from the author jato!

[The Final Dump]

OMG that looked so painful....

Not only did that look painful but that sounded painful as well...

Great clip- a lot of style...
I loved the entire clip from the flashback to the victory scream. The character sure showed that turd!

I'm also glad there was no blood involved in the clip... realism is good but that would've went overboard in this clip.