Needs more girls.
Loved the animation, loved the content. If it had more girls, I'd rate this 11/10.
A lot of the newer animations seek to imitate this humour and fail miserably. It is probably best for other animator/storywriters to just focus on telling something rather than trying to make people laugh.
That, or perhaps my humour is now dated and this clip is 'old humour'?
If so, then I prefer to stick to the old humour rather than the cheesy, try-hard animations I see nowadays.
Thanks for making me laugh JohnnyUtah.